Patri Lily
'~' welcome to my milk chocolate or chocolate flavoured bubble tea profile ^^my English name, for now: Patricia Phamshe/herPlease note that someone else drew my profile picture for me as a gift, and that means I did not draw it myself.Hey hey hey, welcome to my profile. I compose music tracks, play some random games and proofread or grade/mark beginner and intermediate English writings. Not only that, but I'm also a writer who likes to write about certain things sometimes. currently working on a long book haha
20 (or 21) years old.
Scroll further down to see more.- a typical third year english studies university student -IELTS 7.5 (8.5 L&R; Writing Task 2: 7/8/7/7)
Contact me if you want to get your CEFR level ≤ B2/early C1 (NOT CAE) writings in English graded or fixed (in terms of grammar, vocabulary, organisation, perhaps content, etc.). Just send me a message on Newgrounds, Soundcloud or Discord (mainly Discord), then we can have a chat about it. The pricing will be set sometime in the future, other than that it's free for now. (Not TOEFL/TOEIC/IELTS Task 1 Writing please please please...)
(In the real IELTS exam, I got 7/8/7/7 in IELTS Writing Task 2 with an unfinished essay, but I only got 5/6/6/6 in IELTS Writing Task 1)
(The IELTS Writing Task 2 essay proofreading, in this, is only for IELTS candidates below Band 7.0)Please note that I only accept this much from each person:
- maximum 2000 words per week
- maximum 3 writings per weekI can also proofread and grade your writing(s) if they are the answer(s) for (a) writing practice task(s) (again, CEFR B2/early C1 (NOT CAE) or lower please), further information is elaborated in the last part of this site.
My Skills!
| Skills | Level |
|---|---|
| Music making | Intermediate |
| Marking/Proofreading | Unknown |
| Gaming | Unknown |
⌨ My records in video games ⌨
| Games | Score | Achieved in |
|---|---|---|
| Nudge and Budge (Epic Minigames Roblox) | 351.2 (Around top 10 in Vietnam) | January 2022 |
| osu!taiko | 277pp play | March 2024 |
| Taptap Numbers by Jan (Tiktok) | 177 taps/15 seconds | April 2023 |
| Taiko no Tatsujin (Nijiro ver.) | 6th Dan (gold) (Nijiro 2024 ver.) | March 2025 |
🎵 Music composition experience 🎵
I have over 4 years of experience in music producing & composing, but I am not into (both listening to and composing) the popular music genres in this day and age.
Languages ^^
| Languages | Level | Learning Period |
|---|---|---|
| Vietnamese | Native | Native |
| English | C1 advanced (with the speaking skills being only at B2) | 9 years of active usage & 17 years of learning (IELTS (real test) overall band score: 7.5; Writing Task 2 scores: 7/8/7/7) |
| Japanese | A1 Beginner | over a year (I'm bad at the language) |
My Certificates!
| Hey! | I decided to take all my certificates down due to personal reasons. |
^ ~ ^ -- About my grading/marking system -- ^ ~ ^
How is/are my writing(s) assessed?Your writing(s) will be marked based on 4 criteria: Content, Communicative Achievement, Organisation and Language. Each criteria will be given a mark from 0 to 10 (Whole marks only, no half marks are given), then all of them will be averaged out to a score based on the scale from 0 to 10. Please note that the accuracy of the marks/grades given for your writing is around 80%, as I am just a typical advanced English user with some grading/marking experience.Note: Currently I can only proofread and give suggestions on the majority of reports, proposals, reviews, emails and abstract writings. I cannot grade/mark them due to my lack of experience.
Thank you for scrolling to the bottom! Have a nice day!This website was made on 2022.9.14