Patri Lily
'~' welcome to my milk chocolate or chocolate flavoured bubble tea profile ^^my English name, for now: Patricia Phamshe/her • 2004Please note that someone else drew my profile picture for me as a gift, and that means I did not draw it myself.Hey hey hey, welcome to my profile. I compose music tracks, play some random games and proofread or grade/mark beginner and intermediate English + Vietnamese writings. Not only that, but I'm also a writer who likes to write about certain things sometimes. currently working on a long book haha
20 (or 21) years old.
Scroll further down to see more.- a typical third year english studies university student -IELTS 7.5 (8.5 L&R; Writing Task 2: 7/8/7/7)
Contact me if you would like to have your CEFR ≤B2 / early C1 (NOT CAE) English writing graded and/or improved (in terms of grammar, vocabulary, organisation, content and et cetera). You can message me on Newgrounds, SoundCloud or Discord (primarily Discord), and we will discuss it. Pricing will be set at a later date, other than that it is free for now. (Please no TOEFL/TOEIC/IELTS Task 1 Writing...)
(In the real IELTS exam, I got 7/8/7/7 in IELTS Writing Task 2 with an unfinished essay, but I only got 5/6/6/6 in IELTS Writing Task 1)
(The IELTS Writing Task 2 essay proofreading service from me, in this, is only for IELTS candidates below Band 7.0 in that specific section)Please note that I only accept this much from each person:
- maximum 3000 words per week
- maximum 3 writings per weekI can also proofread and grade your writing(s) if they are the answer(s) for (a) writing practice task(s) (again, CEFR B2/early C1 (NOT CAE) or lower please), further information is elaborated in the last part of this site.
My Skills!
| Skills | Level |
|---|---|
| Music composition | Intermediate |
| Marking/Proofreading | Intermediate |
| Gaming | Unknown |
⌨ My records in video games ⌨
| Games | Score | Achieved in |
|---|---|---|
| Nudge and Budge (Epic Minigames Roblox) | 405.9 (Around top 10-15 in Vietnam) | May 2025 |
| osu!taiko | 301pp play | March 2024 |
| Taptap Numbers by Jan (Tiktok) | 177 taps/15 seconds | April 2023 |
| Taiko no Tatsujin (Nijiro ver.) | 6th Dan (gold) - 金六段 (Nijiro 2024 ver.) | March 2025 |
🎵 Music composition experience 🎵
I have about 4.5 years of experience in music production and composition, but I am not into (both listening to and composing) any of the popular music genres in this day and age.
Languages ^^
| Languages | Level | Learning Period |
|---|---|---|
| Vietnamese | Native | Native |
| English | C1 advanced (with the speaking skills being only at B2) | 9 years of active usage & 17 years of learning |
| Japanese | A1 Beginner | over a year (I'm bad at the language) |
My Certificates!
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^ ~ ^ -- About my grading/marking system -- ^ ~ ^
How is/are my writing(s) assessed?Your writing(s) will be marked based on 4 criteria: Content, Communicative Achievement, Organisation and Language. Each criteria will be given a mark from 0 to 10 (Half marks are also given along with whole marks), then all of them will be averaged out to a score based on the scale from 0 to 10. Please note that the accuracy of the marks/grades given for your writing may only be around 80%, as I am just a typical advanced English user with some grading/marking experience.Note: Currently I can only proofread and give suggestions on a portion of reports, proposals, reviews, emails, abstract writings and such. I cannot really grade/mark them due to my lack of experience.
Thank you for scrolling to the bottom! Have a nice day!This website was made on 2022.9.14